4.28.2005
[冷眼看學園] 學生的英文作業
這不是我派的作業
是系上某個老師派的~
學生要上台報告寫的稿子
msn傳來希望我可以幫她修改~
我看了只有搖頭~
第一次看的時候,第一段我就不行了
馬上要求他重新修改
可是第二次再看,我實在看不出有改過的痕跡
這已經是我退過一次之後再請她重交的東西
我只是copy上來,連標點符號都還沒改過!
結果--->
可能是我程度太差....我還真的不知從何改起....
有人想挑戰嗎?
JC...我想你可以的!
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Introduce first Dubai .It is area about for 380 sq.km., and only demesne 5% in United Arab Emirates
Today du bai become predominant to Business center , Financial center ,and Freightage transship center in the Middle East, especially it situated on Eurasia center Geographic Position.
It is arid climate. Sunny. Precipitation is infrequent and irregular, falling mainly in winter. Temperatures range from a low of about 10.5deg.C/50deg.F to a high of 48deg.C/118.4deg.F.
Be exchanging the currency aspect :US$ 1.00 about can exchange Dhs 3.65
In the transportation aspect. The airport can fly to 120 international cities from the Dubai. The 4 number buses go back and forth between the bus stop of Gold Souq and the airport .The 11,15 and 44 number buses also go to airport, but time is longer, number less. With Taipei time difference: Compare Taipei lateness four hours
Hotel aspect:The hotel is the airport bus with 8 Rolls Royce.
You even can request the helicopter to connect to send, in 15 minutes of distance, lead off from high got empty to have a view the grandiose landscape that the Dubai, after appreciating the magnificent view, just land slowly at the helicopter fall of the 28th floors.If you are want to step into this hotel that is pay to visit . however, in weekday is 100 Dhs, and in holiday off 200 Dhs, But can arrive to make the restaurant consumption.
And all customers have to wear to carry to pack the formal dress into
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除了幫她重寫以外
我想不到有什麼方式可以重新修改~
我只能說~
我越來越崇拜我這個教英文的同事了~
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厲害,真的很難看的懂
回覆刪除本人願意以500元的代價幫他重寫...
回覆刪除真的不會太貴
因為要加上我剛剛辛苦看完他過程中的煎熬.......T.T
誒, this is not the first time i've been asked to do a
回覆刪除check/edit/rewrite. i'll have it ready by tomorrow morning. po.
在我遙遠的記憶中!!^^~......
回覆刪除聯考不是要考英文嘛??
現在這年頭英文的低標是零分嗎?? O_o*...
-_-"...各位老師!! 這就是標準的"翻譯機文法" -_-!!..
Dear JC:
回覆刪除你不會是當真的吧?
你真的要挑戰這個極限任務嗎?
還是你看過更離譜的?
我已經想叫學生回去吃自己了ㄟ...
我不想變成幫她們寫功課的私人家教~
a couple of things before i start...
回覆刪除1. i'm sure your english is fine jenny. it's just there are so
many little adjustments here and there it's better to just
rewrite the whole thing.
2. there are so many encyclopedias and websites where this
student can just copy this stuff from...when i was in 4th grade
i was already copying...this student is so 誠實...
3. since this is an "oral report", i will edit accordingly.
4. please run a spelling check, i'm too lazy.
5. i don't CAPITALIZE letters when i type (too lazy), so please
do the correct capitalizations. but then again, this is
an "oral report"??
6. anything in (parenthesis) is me talking and not part of the
report.
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today i would like to introduce to you the city of dubai. dubai
is the second largest of seven united arab emirates. it is
loacted on the southern shore of the arabian gulf, and has a
population of a little over 1 million. it is also known as
the
FUCK!! it's too long and got deleted! i have to write again!
回覆刪除FUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...it is also known as the "jewel of the crown of arabia".
回覆刪除dubai is located geographically between the middle east and
asia. this advantageous locale has helped it become the
business, financial and trade center of arabia. it is now also
a favorite vacation spot among travellers.
dubai is known as an oasis in its surrounding desert
environment. yet it still has an arid and sunny climate.
rainfall is infrequent and irregular, occuring mostly in the
winter. average temperature ranges from 10.5C to 48C.
currently, the monetary exchange rate runs about 3.65Dhs to one
US dollar.
dubai is a modern and cosmopolitan city, with a fully developed
transportation system. its airport flies daily to over 120
international destinations. it also has a well-developed bus
network. bus number 4 runs roundtrip between the city and the
airport, while buses 11, 15, and 44 also servicing the airport
at less frequent schedules. (要不要提捷運?)
for those of you interested in
...it is also known as the "jewel of the crown of arabia".
回覆刪除dubai is located geographically between the middle east and
asia. this advantageous locale has helped it become the
business, financial and trade center of arabia. it is now also
a favorite vacation spot among travellers.
dubai is known as an oasis in its surrounding desert
environment. yet it still has an arid and sunny climate.
rainfall is infrequent and irregular, occuring mostly in the
winter. average temperature ranges from 10.5C to 48C.
currently, the monetary exchange rate runs about 3.65Dhs to one
US dollar.
dubai is a modern and cosmopolitan city, with a fully developed
transportation system. its airport flies daily to over 120
international destinations. it also has a well-developed bus
network. bus number 4 runs roundtrip between the city and the
airport, while buses 11, 15, and 44 also servicing the airport
at less frequent schedules. (要不要提捷運?)
for those of you interested in
...visitng dubai, there are plenty of hotel options. one can
回覆刪除choose to be whisked away from the hotel in style, riding in
one of 8 rolls royces available. for more adventurous
travellers, there is even a helicopter that can fly directly to
the airport, and provides breathtaking and magnificent views of
the city. (你一直沒提the name of the hotel) the rates for
(insert hotel name) goes for 100Fhs per night on weekdays, and
200 Dhs on the weekends. formal attire in the hotel is a must,
and that means no shorts or sandals!
correction:
回覆刪除one can choose to be whisked away from the hotel
should be:
one can choose to be whisked away from the airport to the
hotel...
and: there is even a helicopter that can fly directlt to the
sirport
should be: helicopter that can fly directly to the hotel..
and: 100Fhs
should be: 100Dhs
累死了...i need McDonalds NOW.
回覆刪除Dear JC:
回覆刪除辛苦你了~
But I thougt you NEED McDonalds EVERYDAY?
haha. very funny.
回覆刪除but this is more funny: who is sudnay?
Jenny
回覆刪除好妙...
為什麼他在很多奇怪的地方要大寫
The airport can fly to 120 international cities from the Dubai.
不愧是中東,連機場也有魔毯的功能,可以飛到120個國際城市歐!
我是不是太機車了
呼呼...
人善被人欺 馬善被人騎
回覆刪除幫他改了第一次
以後就等著被騎吧