這不是我派的作業
是系上某個老師派的~
學生要上台報告寫的稿子
msn傳來希望我可以幫她修改~
我看了只有搖頭~
第一次看的時候,第一段我就不行了
馬上要求他重新修改
可是第二次再看,我實在看不出有改過的痕跡
這已經是我退過一次之後再請她重交的東西
我只是copy上來,連標點符號都還沒改過!
結果--->
可能是我程度太差....我還真的不知從何改起....
有人想挑戰嗎?
JC...我想你可以的!
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Introduce first Dubai .It is area about for 380 sq.km., and only demesne 5% in United Arab Emirates
Today du bai become predominant to Business center , Financial center ,and Freightage transship center in the Middle East, especially it situated on Eurasia center Geographic Position.
It is arid climate. Sunny. Precipitation is infrequent and irregular, falling mainly in winter. Temperatures range from a low of about 10.5deg.C/50deg.F to a high of 48deg.C/118.4deg.F.
Be exchanging the currency aspect :US$ 1.00 about can exchange Dhs 3.65
In the transportation aspect. The airport can fly to 120 international cities from the Dubai. The 4 number buses go back and forth between the bus stop of Gold Souq and the airport .The 11,15 and 44 number buses also go to airport, but time is longer, number less. With Taipei time difference: Compare Taipei lateness four hours
Hotel aspect:The hotel is the airport bus with 8 Rolls Royce.
You even can request the helicopter to connect to send, in 15 minutes of distance, lead off from high got empty to have a view the grandiose landscape that the Dubai, after appreciating the magnificent view, just land slowly at the helicopter fall of the 28th floors.If you are want to step into this hotel that is pay to visit . however, in weekday is 100 Dhs, and in holiday off 200 Dhs, But can arrive to make the restaurant consumption.
And all customers have to wear to carry to pack the formal dress into
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除了幫她重寫以外
我想不到有什麼方式可以重新修改~
我只能說~
我越來越崇拜我這個教英文的同事了~
